Hi unknown member and embers of always, this is my last song, I enjoyed doing it, lyrics have a so easy construction and cadence that it has been a pleasure working on it.
The rain here gives way to the story. You know I love working with rain on stage; it's like in films, a rainy scene creates a special atmosphere.
I think it0s a very special song. Tell me..
Mora
https://youtu.be/nmP-2-VuIVk
It's raining,
I didn't take my raincoat
but I remain there,
waiting for her, still
I'm a tree
in the middle of a stream
of leaky umbrellas passing me.
She is late,
her watch is always asleep,
making her live at her own rhythm.
I start walking
as she appears, crossing
without looking at the traffic
I feel fine
despite the reproaches
that could come out of my mouth
But her smile
could stop any storm,
and dispel any kind of fog.
Could I leave her
at the mercy of the chaos
she sows, wherever she goes?
I love her
though she made me a ghost,
and inhaled the last breath from my chest.
I love her
despite her being the knife,
and the hand, that drives it into my heart.
This is beautifully written. It has a quiet, poetic quality that pulls you in instead of shouting for attention. I especially liked the imagery of "I'm a tree in the middle of a stream of leaky umbrellas passing me" and "her watch is always asleep"—those are memorable lines that feel original. The ending is powerful too, showing how love can survive even when it hurts. Thanks for sharing such an honest and emotional piece. I really enjoyed hearing it
Quote from: Elvis Nash on Jul 19, 2026, 04:54 PMThis is beautifully written. It has a quiet, poetic quality that pulls you in instead of shouting for attention. I especially liked the imagery of "I'm a tree in the middle of a stream of leaky umbrellas passing me" and "her watch is always asleep"—those are memorable lines that feel original. The ending is powerful too, showing how love can survive even when it hurts. Thanks for sharing such an honest and emotional piece. I really enjoyed hearing it
Hola!!
I was wondering if you'll be active or paralyzed waiting for the football match, hahaha. It seems like the world has united to chase a ball...
Thanks, what a nice comment!
I worked a lot on the lyrics. I wrote them first in Spanish;I was sad and inspired. Then I translated them into English, phew! It was really hard to get them right. Translations are a whole other world...
I was also thinking about your songs, as well as mine, haha, about the power you manage to give them and the variety in their arrangements. I still have a lot to learn. I don't know if I'll have time, hahaha, but well, something is something.
I'm discovering possibilities I hadn't noticed before... It's like after driving down the same street many times, and suddenly realizing there's a pharmacy! LOL
The eyes and the mind, the soul and automatism... Has it ever happened to you that you're driving and then suddenly realize you've been driving without actually being behind the wheel...? Things like that...
Well, I say goodbye to you, have a nice walk with your wife, your dog and your dreams
Naw I'm only into music . Working on new one Smart Monkey Survive the stupid dies . Naw you don't have a lot to learn . You got your style down . I don't wear seat belts and get tickets only thing I notice on driving. I don't need cops telling me anything . Well any way keep chasing the fight
Sounds good Mora .
@Elvis Nash Yesterday Spain won the World Cup. For me, it was like Spain had won against Trump after all the things he's said against my country, hahaha. Here, it was like a crazy circus, everyone in their cars, honking their horns, you could hear their laughter and shouts as they drove by, fireworks, laughter, groups of people running and screaming. It seemed like we had won a war, the end of the world, but... well, at least they're happy. I am too, even though I don't like football. It makes me think a lot about all that money chasing after a ball.
Your new song.. it'll be good. The truth shines through, even if it's bitter...
I'm finishing another one. I had shared it before in the lyrics section, but I've completely changed it. Now it's going to be called "You Are My Karma." I've given it a different meaning; it's more understandable for everyone, hahaha.
Have a good day.
But, you, when you sleep, haha.
Adiós!
Mora