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Title: You are my Karma
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jul 29, 2026, 12:44 PM
Hu

Do you believe that some people are born for others? Yes? No?




I dream
among the shadows
of the hours
that drag on,
in that limbo of chiaroscuro
that creeps across the walls
before fading into the dark

And even though
my mouth is filled
with words
that should be spoken,
silence binds my tongue,
while I watch you, watch you, watch you...


I observe you,
I spy on you.
I don't know what
I'm searching for
in your face,

It's a compulsive gesture x2

I pretend
everything is fine,
I even smile
and laugh,
and when I talk,
I can't stop talking,
but in reality,
I say nothing,

perhaps, perhaps, perhaps,

The path I gave you
is not enough
for your dreams to walk far

perhaps, perhap, perhaps,

but my love protects you
from your storms,
and your shipwrecks,
I am your harbor,

perhaps, perhaps, perhaps,

I was born for you
you are my karma,
Title: Re: You are my Karma
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Aug 26, 2026, 10:14 AM
No replies, just 0, but here I am, posing me up, I think this song can entertain a lot of people

Mora
Title: Re: You are my Karma
Post by: Elvis Nash on Aug 28, 2026, 02:02 AM
Hey Mora been real busy . I don't believe in Karma . But I liked how you produced the song , in that deep story poetry
Title: Re: You are my Karma
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Aug 29, 2026, 07:08 PM
Bueno, action is god, it makes us feel young and gives us perspective!! Thank you Elvis, much appreciated, but, I think that as soon as I respond you.. hahaha



Mora
Title: Re: You are my Karma
Post by: Elvis Nash on Aug 30, 2026, 03:15 AM
Were bringing God in this ? Well ok , Your a clown Elvis signed God . You're testing my patience on the religion jokes . it is not Disney Land , Its heaven . your like Lucifer . Well I know when I'm not wanted . Very insulting , Does he have a last name , Don't start again
Title: Re: You are my Karma
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Aug 30, 2026, 12:07 PM
Pero no hombre no!! Elvis, don't get me wrong, I couldn't care less about religion. I was just sharing this anecdote to apply it to karma, to the lack of reaction to an action!
Poor Jesus, they have him hanging there eternally... Besides, it makes my stomach churn to think that in mass they say they eat the body of Christ and drink his blood! That makes us cannibals, hahaha.
Anyway, while you and I are talking, they're putting on videos with traps here... or so it seems, so let's keep chatting about the lies that govern the world.
Aside from everything, with the story of Adam and Eve in the comic, the first humans on Earth... and I say, if it was just the two of them, all those who appeared afterward and multiplied were brothers with brothers, haha, uncles, nephews, cousins, brothers, more brothers... What are we?
Mora


Title: Re: You are my Karma
Post by: Elvis Nash on Aug 30, 2026, 10:22 PM
Adam and Eve the first comics and it continues in 2026 lol. I'll probably die from laughing on religion . Invisible men in the sky , you gotta be kidding me. No were serious , Well theres your problem right there .Religion is comedy central with dramatic moments  .
Title: Re: You are my Karma
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Sep 03, 2026, 09:21 AM
Elvis
Actually, it's a psychological trick. The invisible has a power we don't know what it is; we, with our imagination, are the ones who give it that power. An invisible being that's everywhere sounds amazing, plus it's watching you all the time, even in scatological moments? Oof! Poor invisible being, hahaha. Religion also uses disguises that frighten people to become magicians... Good plan. Well, besides that, how's everything? My song? Karma? I believe in karma wholeheartedly. The world is karma, the karma loop. I'll have to write a song, the karma loop.

Take care

Mora
Title: Re: You are my Karma
Post by: Elvis Nash on Sep 15, 2026, 03:02 AM
Pretty good . Big monkey off my back . Track a new song this week . I'm have no idea on religion or Karma . I do know my cats sleep 17 hours a day and my dog wants my food