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Title: Smart Monkeys
Post by: Elvis Nash on Aug 12, 2026, 08:03 AM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dt5MqsTg164
Title: Re: Smart Monkeys
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Aug 12, 2026, 06:30 PM
Hi Elvis

I like the song, the title is great LOL the story is tough, funny, cynical, and the song is really catchy, it sounds great,  the truth is that your work is so well done! I loved the video.
Title: Re: Smart Monkeys
Post by: Elvis Nash on Aug 14, 2026, 04:04 AM
 Communications skills are essential. If you can figure that out . The smart monkeys survives  . Which was once beating your chest came down to a PHD on understanding your opponent . a genius is not born , that is something you have to work on . New ideas of the present , and lessons from the past

Thanks Mora
Title: Re: Smart Monkeys
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Aug 14, 2026, 10:26 AM
Language is deceptive, not because the speaker is lying, but because some people only hear what they want to hear—that filter that distorts everything and moves the world... that's the secret of great manipulators: knowing how those they want to hear actually hear.
Your language is clear to me; for others it might be different, but the vast majority understand it, I'm sure. Stones in glass always sound the same.

Hasta otro rato Elvis

Mora
Title: Re: Smart Monkeys
Post by: Elvis Nash on Aug 15, 2026, 04:50 PM
Quote from: Mora Amaro La Loba on Aug 14, 2026, 10:26 AMLanguage is deceptive, not because the speaker is lying, but because some people only hear what they want to hear—that filter that distorts everything and moves the world... that's the secret of great manipulators: knowing how those they want to hear actually hear.
Your language is clear to me; for others it might be different, but the vast majority understand it, I'm sure. Stones in glass always sound the same.

Hasta otro rato Elvis


We just go on tour and talk to kids . We'd make a billion , And now the great Mora and Elvis Nash . your life is about to be changed forever. Without the bullshit of Tony Robbins of walking over hot coals . Nope not doing that . Would did you say ? You make no sense at all . I was lost on page one on your book . Who wrote that some prodigy with 8,000 PhDs ?

Mora
Title: Re: Smart Monkeys
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Aug 15, 2026, 06:00 PM
I don't understand anything, not a single thing, hahaha. But it sounds funny. Who was saying that? Who is Tony Robins? Absurd things always seem like a movie.
Mora
Title: Re: Smart Monkeys
Post by: icystorm on Aug 23, 2026, 06:32 PM
@Elvis Nash — A catchy track and a cool video, man. Solid bass, drums, and rhythm. Good vocals, cool lyrics, and a clear mix. Nice job! 8)

 
Title: Re: Smart Monkeys
Post by: Elvis Nash on Aug 28, 2026, 02:08 AM
Tony Robbins is a positive coach  teacher , Very famous on achieving goals . Unorthodox ideas on how to accomplish that . I was joking on Tony

Thanks Icy , I'm a smart monkey lol