Midnight Moon

[Vicki]

Thanks, @idunno ! I have not heard of Lehua Kalima...so now I need to look her up!

[mayaclars]

@Vicki ,

"(1) the melody..."  I think you are being overly self-critical. Listening to your song, I didn't feel that the melody was "boring". An interesting melody flows airily throughout the song. There are no problems with either the melody or the ending of the song. Everything is very good.

"(2) production..." For my taste, the drums in the song are enough.  This is not a trendy song with over-compressed vocals and an abundance of strange, extraneous sounds. This is a soulful country song. Extra instruments will only distract. I like both the melody and the production.

The song is very soulful. I have listened to it several times already.

Maya

[Vicki]

Thank you very much @mayaclars !

[OleAnders]

Very nice Vicki! It works very well with a simple arrangement so not sure I would arrange this too complex unless you have a very clear idea what you want.

What you could do is to add a little more dynamic to the performance. Like the the third line of each verse you could have stands out a bit more either by more ore less power to your strumming and vocals and the same going into choruses. 

Enjoyed it!

[Vicki]

Thank you @OleAnders ! It's sounding like simple is the way to go. I appreciate your input. And everyone's...