Feedback New producer/songwritter

[J.W]

So, i just finished creating a song and i really need feedback

910348 · break-out

[subvibe]

Hi
Its cool & a nice wide mix
personally i think a nice drum groove would take it to a higher level

well done
subvibe 

[Mora Amaro La Loba]

Interesting palette of sounds!! nice one but I think same as @subvive, maybe?
Oh! The other members here need also feedback ?

[Vicki]

Vocal seems to be in the background...maybe that was your intention? I have trouble making out the words. Interesting piece. I see this is your first post. I look forward to seeing what you have to say about the work of some of our other members, too.