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What would you dream

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jazz101

Hi Guys,

This is a song I wrote about what would happen if we were all on the same page, hope you like it, any feedback appreciated, George.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M9eBb1fs-9c


Vicki

That's a beautiful song. I especially like these kinds of topics, too. I don't have much for feedback. I noticed one thing, and I know professionals do this all the time, but I prefer clear enunciation on word combinations like "would you" (instead of wouldjoo). A small thing and didn't keep me from loving and enjoying the song.

Vicki
Vicki aka CaliaMoko aka Mom aka Grandma aka Sweetie

jazz101

Thank you, all feedback is welcome.

icystorm

@jazz101 -- This is a very good track. It's smooth and polished. The music and vocals blend well together in the mix, which is very clear. The sentiments of the song's lyrics are very laudable. Nice work to everyone involved. I enjoyed listening! :D

jazz101

Thank you,

your feedback is always appreciated,

George

Elvis Nash

Hey George lovely tune to start the new year

jazz101

Hi Elvis,

Thanks your comments are always welcome,

George