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Becky

Hello,

Not sure what's meant to go in "released" songs and what's meant to go in "finished", but i did pay for an actual alive musician on this and get it mixed and mastered, and i even made a lyric video, so i guess that's about as close to "released" as I'm going to get.

This is meant to be a bit of a quiet scream into the void on where we're at as a society and as guardians of this planet.

All and any feedback welcome.

Thanks!

Vicki

My understanding is that "finished" songs are still open for suggestions for improvement and "released" songs are just to show what we've done and are no longer planning to make any adjustments to them.

That's if I understand it correctly.

This song is right up my alley! It says what I think while being entertaining and engaging. The only thing I noticed, if you were going to do any edits, was one spot where I would change the rhythm a bit to finesse the way the word "questions" comes across.

I like it a lot!
Vicki aka CaliaMoko aka Mom aka Grandma aka Sweetie

icystorm

@Becky — First, welcome (or welcome back) to the forum!

Your song is very enjoyable. Your vocals are great, and the lyrics are poignant and fitting. The music is emotionally engaging, complementing the lyrics well. The mix is also clear and polished. It's a well-crafted track, and I enjoyed listening. Well done! :D

Kind regards,
Joseph 

Elvis Nash

Its a bit dark , But it came out good , mixed very well