While this is a finished song it is not a production version, it is simply me with my electric guitar in one take. Comments are are most welcome provided they are not production focused. I normally perform this with my band where it includes appropriate lead breaks.

It is not from personal experience but is a generic tale of breakup where a man pleads with his wife who is leaving him.

Catchy tune, no crits. Great guitar--maybe someday I'll practice enough to catch up.

Vicki

Very nice song,
Your voice has so many nuances, I don't know how it would work in other styles but here it sounds great!!! Beautiful chords.

Could you share the lyrics?

Sounds good for one take , good job man