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Mora Amaro La Loba

Hello, hola, holo, Merry Christmas!!! Too soon to congratulate you? No, not at all!

This song, with its snow and cold, could be a greeting card, why not?


It was cold,
a dog barked at the night
and the silence that remained
was still heavy.
 
It was cold
the snow that was falling
left flowers with thorns
on the wings of the crows
 
The black and white merged
and the coming dawn
gave it its grayish tone
from its early glass
 
Everything and nothing
came together
getting lost in the sky,
the sea and the air spoke to each other
and the silence that remained
was still heavy.
 
It was cold on either shore of waiting
the ghost of hope threw stones
into the water of indifference
but they barely made a sound
as they bounced
among frozen waves

and the silence that remained
was still heavy
I did not know that to live <I had to die so many times

Elvis Nash

Hey Mora , This swings real good in the pocket girl , Great groove going , More content than usual , good job

Mora Amaro La Loba

Hola chico,
This song was born from a poem I wrote, oddly enough, in the summer, hahaha. I love it, even though it has a range that makes my voice sound deeper, but perhaps that's why it has that slightly sinister, or very sinister, feel, along with some parts of the music!

My mother was a passionate reader and had a very extensive library, and among so many titles there was a mystery section that I devoured avidly... Crimes, disappearances, unsolved cases, darkness, the dead, have been swirling around in my head ever since, along with Isaac Asimov, hahaha. Anyway, that's it.
Thank you so much for listening and encouraging me.

Felices fiestas, take care, cold is a bad enemy.
I did not know that to live <I had to die so many times

jazz101

Hi Mora, not been in for a while, but nice to be back, loved your song, moody and atmospheric as usual, you don't disappoint, all the best, George

Mora Amaro La Loba

Hola @jazz101
Glad to see you back!!! Thank you so much, have happy holidays!!! I hope you are ok!!!
I did not know that to live <I had to die so many times