Hi

Here is a new song i have done Pop Ambient
tried to get a big sound 

My Head has Gone by subvibe

Thanks for taking the time to listen

subvibe

Because I have such a hard time making out the words, I feel like I can't do justice to a review. I think the words are an important part of the songs. I'd love it if people would post their lyrics.

That being said, I love the sound of this. I can hear "My head is gone" of course. I heard "I can't get enough" and "You make me feel like...[something]. The title is intriguing. I'd like to know more. I like just listening to the song as music without considering the words, in any case. It's lovely.

@Vicki 

Hi
a lot of oohs & ha,s

basically its these 

Hey Hey Hey  mmm  mmm

It feels so Safe This road that we have taken
It seems so Brave till we know what weve forsaken
couldnt get any closer to heaven Im already there
Higher by every second & its not fair

With you next to me i dont know how to breath 
& you make me feel that this is all i want
Cos my head is Gone 
 
hey hey hey My head is gone 2x

Im stuck right here i dont want to miss a moment
i sware it feels like its paradise were holding
cos everything i bla bla    i just cant lose it
now i am addicted to your love Cant get enough

With you next to me i dont know how to breath 
& you make me feel that this is all i want
Cos my head is Gone 

Hey hey Hey oh oh

subvibe

Ah, it's a love song! It sounds like the protagonist is a little conflicted, although he declares he is in heaven, so he must have decided his present condition is worth losing "what we've forsaken". That, along with "I don't know how to breathe" tells me this lover is young and it's early in the relationship. Then you confirm it with the hook: "My head is gone".

The whole song reflects the reality of new love and its accompanying euphoria. I have one suggestion--feel free to take it or leave it--the last line of the first verse: "Higher by every second and it's not fair" doesn't make sense to me. I don't understand what it is that isn't fair. I would probably say something more like, "Higher by every (or the) second, floating in the air."

The song really illustrates the singer's feelings well!

Vicki

Hola @subvibe
So nice song!!! Wonderful experience in the ears, wonderful lyrics!!! Really a great song, ey ey ey ey ey

I'll review this again on here as you received some strange comments on the other page. Hopefully none of that nonesense here.

A great track - really well produced like all your music. You deserve success. I really enjoyed this.

Thanks @ChrisPrice 
Thanks for sticking up for me , the conversation seemed to be going nowhere !!
maybe i should do a Led Zep style song that would really freak him out 

anyway i am always open & welcome comments & will always give a honest answer
unfortunately i don't have access to many musicians here so i have to do my best
on my own with mostly using midi to record my songs

greetz
subvibe