What D'You Think of That?

[Thekesslerboy]

Inspired by meeting a great lady, so obviously I wrote a song about her!  Could probably do with a bit of editing of the instrumental outro.  Will probably get to it.

What D'You Think of That?

Is it a crime, you're on my mind?
It's a matter of fact
Love you more than I did before
What d'you think of that?

I'm a wreck when I kiss your neck
And your stunning back
Nothing less, you're a Goddess
What d'you think of that?

On my knees for your mysteries
Undiscovered map
When you smile, I gotta stay a while
What d'you think of that?

Intelligent plans, elegant hands
And you love your cat
I rejoice your heavenly voice
What's the point of that?

You get no peace from the thought police
Least from where I'm sat
You're no fake, you're wide awake
What d'you make of that?

A cheeky cow, and a sweetheart now
The world's turned to crap
Fact or fiction, contradiction
What d'you think of that?

[Thekesslerboy]

Any thoughts, guys?

[calafinestrat]

Good catchy song. Nice guitar work and good melody. I think it needs a middle 8 to change direction a bit between verses and possibly some vocal harmonies.